• LinktankEnglish
    22·
    11 days ago

    The constant changing of text size and occasional sideways words do not help make the message easier to read.

    • PineRune@lemmy.worldEnglish
      6·
      11 days ago

      I was about to say, seeing anything like this makes me immediately ignore it. Too long, and too difficult to read or focus on.

    • delgato@sh.itjust.worksEnglish
      1·
      10 days ago

      I know what you mean yet I do enjoy the design of this poster, it is like something I would see in a Wild West Gazette. But in this day and age I agree this poster is not effective in conveying the political message. Maybe reduce word count, I think text size and sideways words are okay when used modestly.

      • LinktankEnglish
        1·
        10 days ago

        It’s not a live laugh love poster. This is serious shit. There’s a time and place, and this aint it.

  • technomad@slrpnk.netEnglish
    3·
    10 days ago

    I agree with the others that it’s a bit too dense. Shortening it up and making it a bit more succinct would help.

    Also, one small note (just add the word ‘put’):

    …kidnapped imprisoned & -put- in centers of detention…

    • Cort@lemmy.worldEnglish
      1·
      9 days ago

      It’s a stylistic choice, but I think the & should be read as being between kidnapped & imprisoned

      • technomad@slrpnk.netEnglish
        1·
        9 days ago

        Good point. I didn’t really think of it like that (or see it that way visually), but that would make sense.