Lee Duna@lemmy.nz to Technology@lemmy.worldEnglish · 1 year agoRevealed: car industry was warned keyless vehicles vulnerable to theft a decade agowww.theguardian.comexternal-linkmessage-square55fedilinkarrow-up1543arrow-down114cross-posted to: technology@lemmy.world
arrow-up1529arrow-down1external-linkRevealed: car industry was warned keyless vehicles vulnerable to theft a decade agowww.theguardian.comLee Duna@lemmy.nz to Technology@lemmy.worldEnglish · 1 year agomessage-square55fedilinkcross-posted to: technology@lemmy.world
minus-squarejust_another_person@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3arrow-down10·1 year agoJust a writing tip: separate your points into distinct sections. Your point makes sense, but reads better when broken up into distinct paragraphs or thoughts.
minus-squareKecessa@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up7arrow-down1·1 year agoIt’s already separated into two paragraphs, separating both points I’m making.
minus-squarejust_another_person@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1arrow-down4·1 year agoCertainly is after your edits. Thanks.
minus-squareKecessa@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·edit-21 year ago… I didn’t split it in two as an edit, it was split from the get go… Edit: I looked again and the only difference is that I added “proportionally”
Just a writing tip: separate your points into distinct sections.
Your point makes sense, but reads better when broken up into distinct paragraphs or thoughts.
It’s already separated into two paragraphs, separating both points I’m making.
Certainly is after your edits. Thanks.
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I didn’t split it in two as an edit, it was split from the get go…
Edit: I looked again and the only difference is that I added “proportionally”