• MyTurtleSwimsUpsideDown@fedia.io
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        4 days ago

        Well obviously it should have been a semicolon separating clauses. It should read:

        The older you get the more deeply [you get]; out of grocery stores, you care about the lay.

      • lime!@feddit.nu
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        4 days ago

        i always read commas as pauses, and when they’re at the end of a line they sound like breaths. it sounds so weird in my head.