[MAN 2]: Heh, sometimes that’s just the way the cookie crumbles amigo…

MAN 2 cocks gun, smokes entire cigarette

[MAN 2]: and sometimes the cookie crumbles you… …

  • OgdenTO [he/him]@hexbear.net
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    10 days ago

    It should cut to a secondary character, also grappling with change, biting down on a cookie at the same time as the decision point of their storyline

    • happybadger [he/him]@hexbear.netOP
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      10 days ago

      That’d be a good idea. The audience would see the cookie and know MAN 2 meant that kind of cookie and not slang for something dirty.

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      10 days ago

      With droplets of milk and crumbs falling to the ground, mirroring the body and blood falling to the ground. This provides a parallel between the two characters doing something that they can’t take back