• gift_of_gab@lemmy.world
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    32 minutes ago

    I always think of Metallica’s Saint Anger:

    🎶 Medallion noose, I hang myself

    Saint Anger 'round my neck

    I feel my world shake

    Like an earthquake

    Hard to see clear

    Is it me? Is it fear?

    I’m not even angry with you

    I’m not even angry with you

    I’m not even angry with you

    I’m not even angry with you

    🎶

    Yet the real lyrics are:

    I’m madly in anger with you

    I’m madly in anger with you

    I’m madly in anger with you

    I’m madly in anger with you

    sigh…

  • idiomaddict@lemmy.world
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    2 hours ago

    In lay me down by the dirty heads, the line:

    But they were seen by the good eye of the mean billy green

    Should have been:

    But they were seen by the keen eye of the mean billy green

  • CodexArcanum@lemmy.dbzer0.com
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    There’s a break-up song on Chvrch’s debuted album called Tether. One line, frequently repeated, goes “I’m feeling capable of… seeing the end.” A fine lyric, very breakup, much hopeful.

    Except, I can’t tell when listening that she isn’t saying “I feel incapable of…” I don’t know if it’s intentional but I think the ambiguity really elevates the song from semi-empowering breakup song to powerfully-relatable song about the chaos of seeing a relationship end; simultaneously believing you can get through it while also having no idea how you’ll ever get through it.

    It’s just fun wordplay too: feeling capable/feel incapable. Makes me want to use that structure more in my own writing.

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    Damn it, Mr.Ingle. Can you not sing “in the garden of eden” without sounding like you have a mouth full of pudding?

    Fuck it. We’ll just change the name of the damned song. Who the hell makes a 17 minute long song, anyhow? You’re a damned idiot!

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      20 minutes ago

      Also, Mr. Miller? What the hell is a pompatus of love??

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    There used to be a greater power alone on the sea:
    You became a light on the dark side of me. Love became a draw that I could not appeal. But did you know that when it snows, My eyes become alive, and the light that you shine can be seen?

    Baby, I compare you to a kiss from a rose on the grey…

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    4 hours ago

    🎶Wrapped up like a douche, another owner in the night🎶

    🎶Hold me closer, Tony Danza🎶

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      23 minutes ago

      I like to sing, “Wrapped up like a douche, another rubber in the night” but yours sounds closer. That song is great for this. “Blighted by the right, wrapped up like douche, another Romney in the fight”

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    4 hours ago

    “It’s too late to roll the dice” instead of “it’s too late to apologize” sounds much more meaningful.

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      21 minutes ago

      Ooh, I like this one! I thought it was, “it’s too late to call the job” when I first heard it and was pretty unsure what he was going for…

  • Carvex@lemmy.world
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    And I’ll sing all night and in the mornin’ light

    When your shades are on and your head’s on ice

    You’ll know you’ve seen the redneck sodomy