New story, I hope you like it. Feedback always welcome.

  • poVoq@slrpnk.netM
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    11 months ago

    I can see what you are trying to do in this text, but as a metaphor it doesn’t really work and the use of “open web” etc makes it too up front as well. Which leaves this text in a weird half metaphorical / half not situation that is rather confusing.

    And it isn’t very Solarpunkish 😉

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      11 months ago

      Ok, I see. To be honest, I didn’t put as much thought in this than in the last stories. Maybe it would have worked if it was longer … I will think about it! Thanks anyway for the feedback.

      And it isn’t very Solarpunkish 😉

      the use of “open web” etc makes it too up front as well

      That’s true. But otherwise, I don’t think the idea would have come across

      Well yes, but Solarpunk also supported dezentrality 😇

      the use of “open web” etc makes it too up front as well